MY SPECIAL PLACE by Brody.
In my special place, I see the sparkling water of the sea. I Saw fish swimming really fast in the sea. I also saw flying fish. I tried to catch a tiny fish with my bare hands. I didn't catch one because they were too fast.
At my special place. I see seagulls gliding through the sky. They screech and poop every where.
I hate seagulls because they annoy everyone.
In my special place.I Like sharks zooming as fast as they can through The sea. it is amazing I can’t believe my eyes.
And the sparkling sand on the beach side.
My special place is Waimarama Beach.
nice work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletegood story brody but maybe chaining the font because it makes you sound like a robot
ReplyDeletei liked that you described about the water
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